...Art needs work...
Honestly the music and voices where not that bad and I had no problems with them; however, the art is not good and the story could use some work. The story just seems to be too simple at this current point and the way the characters are introduced is poor but since this is the first episode I will not criticize that factor too much for it is just the opening and I can understand how opening something can be troubling. The art has no excuse though, the art is poorly done throughout the entire episode and almost convinced me to close the video because how much the art was ruining the episode. I had to stop at one point and think of how this would be if it was just audio without the art and I found it to be much better. The art has proportional problems all over the place. The face, although still bad, I will not be too harsh on because it could be considered "unique" for its style but still has little feel for the proportions of the face. The bodies on the other hand were often disgruntled and distorted in the fashions that they were provided. The shoulders were often found to be tense, the arms often just stubs, and the chest found to have some odd shape as if the top magically was wider than the bottom. Their were numerous other problems associated to the proportions of the body but not as bad. Overall this would do fine if the artist could fix the problems and make the art cleaner and more professional.
yes i am aware my proportions and anatomy needs a lot of work - - but i'm not a professional - i'm just a guy who does this as a hobby and i need to practice just like anyone - - but honestly - if you thought the art was THAT bad...i don't know how you watch much on this site.
I must say you are genius. The whole idea is very well played out and shows true understand and value for the work at hand in an art piece. As an artist I was able to truly recognize and be intrigued by the work that was put forth. Although the different values were shown through the parts of art, I would have liked to see more skill put into some of the objects. The music was also a very nice addition to the piece. Overall, an impressive piece.
Haha, thank you. :) I would have liked to spend more time on it, but unfortunately I only had a week to make it. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I can't understand really...The animation, voices, and sounds were all good but the story line and subject matter was disturbing and inappropriate. I wish that you could use your abilities for something else that would not be so obscure as this flash. Tumors are not a joke and people do die from them...
First of all the gameplay and the idea was awesome and after a bit it was difficult enough to be a challenge. The level editor was also amazing part and was really fun to mess with but you need an area to submit new maps to so people can play them; otherwise you will find posts on here with something like this:
You should play my map(yes this is really a map I made and its not fake for the example so really try it and stuff...)
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Ok...I give...How do you not explode on the number 4? Its happened literaly everytime now and its getting old...I would like to at least move. At least I got 2 of the acheivements...:/
Besides the whole exploding thing the game has decent sound effects and the art looks fine...
Ok this is a really good game with story and gameplay; however, there was a glitch on the part with the politician roach: I was pressing the arrows for one of the characters and I pressed it too many times and the screen went black so I couldnt do anything. Awesome game and will continue to play it even though I have to start over o nthis part because of the glitch.
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