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...Art needs work...

Honestly the music and voices where not that bad and I had no problems with them; however, the art is not good and the story could use some work. The story just seems to be too simple at this current point and the way the characters are introduced is poor but since this is the first episode I will not criticize that factor too much for it is just the opening and I can understand how opening something can be troubling. The art has no excuse though, the art is poorly done throughout the entire episode and almost convinced me to close the video because how much the art was ruining the episode. I had to stop at one point and think of how this would be if it was just audio without the art and I found it to be much better. The art has proportional problems all over the place. The face, although still bad, I will not be too harsh on because it could be considered "unique" for its style but still has little feel for the proportions of the face. The bodies on the other hand were often disgruntled and distorted in the fashions that they were provided. The shoulders were often found to be tense, the arms often just stubs, and the chest found to have some odd shape as if the top magically was wider than the bottom. Their were numerous other problems associated to the proportions of the body but not as bad. Overall this would do fine if the artist could fix the problems and make the art cleaner and more professional.

LewToons responds:

yes i am aware my proportions and anatomy needs a lot of work - - but i'm not a professional - i'm just a guy who does this as a hobby and i need to practice just like anyone - - but honestly - if you thought the art was THAT bad...i don't know how you watch much on this site.

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